tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7939148154659516442.post1231891537933935309..comments2013-09-21T14:05:43.314+10:00Comments on It's a Fine, Fine Line: Missed PrivilegeJess Carlsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12125609222742121527noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7939148154659516442.post-73391929514453787082011-12-31T13:01:12.784+11:002011-12-31T13:01:12.784+11:00i saw your post on fet asking for feedback and tho...i saw your post on fet asking for feedback and thought i'd come visit your blog. Gosh, it looks like you've been blogging almost a year now - cool!<br /><br />On fet, you asked for feedback on your story. i've been roaming around your blog a little bit, and one thing struck me - you've written a description of a similar scene between you and Mr. Good-Company in the post before this one - at least, i guess that's real life? <br /><br />In any case, your description there seemed more vivid and intense to me.. For what it's worth. This one seems accurate and descriptive but the other seems more real.<br /><br />Looking forward to reading more...<br /><br />aishaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com