Wednesday, 31 August 2011

Be gentle!

Well, here it is, my first attempt at an erotic story. I've wanted to try this for sometime now and finally found the guts to do it. Please feel free to criticize and leave feedback. If there is something that would have worked better, tell me. It's the only way I'm ever going to improve. Enjoy.

James opens the door and enters the lounge room. He catches a whiff of cinnamon, the scent coming from Jess's cup of chai. As he breathes in the intoxicating scent he notices Jess herself, curled up on the couch asleep, wrapped in a blanket. She has been home sick for several days, better now but still in a lazy mood she has decided to stay home for just one more day. Just one more day of sleeping in and watching bad tv.

He can't help but smile as he sees her, all curled up and peaceful looking. James walks over and kisses the top of her head, breathing in the floral scent of her shampoo. Jess stirs and smiles up at him. Opening her eyes, she pulls him down on top of her into a massive hug.

Jess now struggles to sit up from under James's weight. He moves aside so that she is sitting curled up into his arm, the blanket still wrapped around her long legs. Unable to help himself, James pulls her in even closer and kisses her gently on the lips. He slowly slides his tongue into her mouth and feels her start to respond.

Jess pushes her mouth harder against James's and moves her tongue to match his. She can feel his hands begin to slide under her blanket, and James takes hold of her waist and pulls her onto his lap.

James pushes the blanket out of the way so that he can see his beautiful girl as she sits astride his lap. Jess's curvy figure is hidden by the oversized flannelette shirt she wears. James undoes the buttons, fumbling slightly on the first one and pushed the folds of the shirt aside.With the shirt now hanging from Jess's shoulders, he can see her heavy breasts and the curve of her belly. Kissing her exposed neck, James begins to feel himself grow hard.

Jess holds James's head as he begins to kiss her softly. As he moves along her collarbone, eventually finding her nipples she feels herself tremble slightly. As much as she enjoys the biting and teasing pain he sometimes inflicts, this tenderness James sometimes displays, makes her want him so much more.

As he continues to kiss her, moving back and forth between her mouth and nipples, Jess reaches down and unzips his pants. She holds his erection in her hands and slowly begins to play with the it. As she runs her fingers across his cock, feeling the pre-cum oozing from the tip, James gasps and kisses her harder, pressing his face into hers, holding her head in his hands.

James pulls Jess's body even closer to his, her nipples brushing up against his chest. He can feel her hands on his cock, feel her trembling as she strokes him. Just as he's thinking how much he wants this beautiful woman, he feels Jess begin to rub his cock against her pussy. She is wet. Very wet.

Jess lets out a short gasp as she slides his cock into her body. The warmth of him always shocks her and fills her up. This first moment, more so than the climax that is to come later, is her favourite part of sex.

As she begins to ride him, James holds her tight by the hips, helping support her as she moves, kissing the nipples that are so close to his face.

Jess can feel her clit rubbing against James's pelvic bone, causing her to let out small moans to match each movement of his cock inside her. She can hear James as well, his own small moans of pleasure exciting her even more.

She kisses him and as she does so she feels one of his hands leave her hips and begin to fondle her clit, creating even more of that wonderful friction than there was before.

After several moments of this Jess begins to feel her orgasm building. She can't concentrate on kissing James as she slowly begins to lose control.

As Jess begins to move faster James can feel how swollen her clit is, he knows that she's going to cum soon. Concentrating on the feel of her around his cock, James knows that it won't be all to soon before he cums as well.

Jess's moves faster and faster. Feeling James cock, feeling his hand on her hip and the other on her clit, she begins to climax. As her vaginal muscles tighten and release, she lets out a long moan and digs her fingernails deep into James's shoulders, relishing the moment.

James watches her cum. Her eyes squeezed shut, her mouth hanging open as she groans, her whole body trembling in arms. As she continues to move, riding her orgasm to completion, James feels his own climax. His balls start to tighten and he ejaculates deep inside of his girl, letting out a strangled moan as he does so.

Jess collapses against James's chest and he wraps his arms around her. Holding her tight against him, James kisses the top of her head. This sick day was definitely worth it.


  1. Nice 2 tips would be, try not to over use thier names to much, James did this, Jess did that, gets a bit repetative and also try using some can really add to a stoty and bring it to life.